假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分。

Today on my way to home on the bus, I saw an old woman get on with her grandson. She was carrying the boysˈ schoolbag. 1 gave my seat to her. But to my surprise, the boy sat down quickly, and the old woman has to stand nearby. Then the boy began to eat a snack but threw away the bag onto the bus. When I saw this, I got angry. I think the boy should not only look after her grandmother but also care for the environment.

Cambridge is a small city on the east of England.    

It has about 120,000 peoples. It’s on the River Cam.  

There is lots of old buildings and churches.         

It’s famous as Cambridge University.              

London is the capital of the UK, with seven millions  

people, but it is bigger than Cambridge and         

it’s busy than Cambridge .London is in the          

south of England and its on the River Thames.       

The river is 36 kilometers long. London is a old city.  

It’s about 2,000 year old. It is famous for Big Ben,   

Buckingham Palace and Tower Bridge. 

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Linda is my friend．She is 15 year old．I got an e-mail from her yesterday．She said she likes science and was good at it．Every summer she traveled and her parents．She said traveling was an important part in her life．Of all the place she visited，she likes Paris best so it was modern and beautiful．She learnt that China is an large and beautiful country  with a history of 5,000 years．That July she will go to Beijing with her parents on plane．They will stay in Beijing for a week  I am sure I will show they around Beijing．                 I’m sure they will have a well time in China．                             

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Linda is my friend, She is 15 year old, I got an e-mail

from her yesterday. She said she likes science and was good at it.

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Every summer she traveled and her parents. She said traveling

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was an important part in her life. Of all the place she visited.

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she likes Paris best so it was modem and beautiful.

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She learnt that China is and large and beautiful country

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with a history of 5,000 years, That July she will go to Beijing

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with her parents on plane. They will stay in Beijing for a week.

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I am sure I will show they around Beijing.

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I'm sure they will have a well time in China.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有5处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

          2.只允许修改5次，多者（从第6处起）不计分。

   When I was 8, my uncle sent me a T-shirt as my birthday present. On morning of my birthday, I wore the T-shirt and walked to the market. On the way, some big boys laughed at me. I turned back and run to my home. I asked my mother, “Why did the boys laugh at me?” My mother looked at my T-shirt with a smile but asked, “Are you lonely?” Suddenly, I had realized why the boys were laughing at me. The message on my T-shirts was “I am lonely”. From then on, I started to pay attention to the words on my clothes.

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Dear Lingling ,

I am have a party for my 14th birthday .Can you            (1) ______

come to it ?  It will is a wonderful party . You can       (2) ______

listen ∧ some popular music and you can see a big         (3) ______

birthday cake . I think it’s more bigger than your        (4)______

backpack .It is as bigger as a desk .Did you see  such      (5) ______

a cake ? It will be a special party ,also. It’s also        (6)______

a dance party .You can dance to the nice music .But           (7)______

you have to take a partner. The party begin at 8:00 pm     (8) ______

next Friday .Welcome to my house .You will enjoy your!    (9) ______

Don’t forget taking a boy !                            (10)_____                                                       

Yours,

Lucy

1.It is on Sunday today. Early in the morning my            

2.classmate and I went to Xi Shan by bus to plant            

3.trees. As soon as we got there, we began work.            

4.Some were digging, some were planted, and there were  

5.still some watering. Both of us were trying hard to           

6.plant as much as we could. All of us were afraid of          

7.falling behind. Before work, we were wet all over. Looking

8.at the lines of young tree, we forgot our tiredness. We      

9.came back at 12.we all think it is good of us to take        

10.part out this kind of physical labor(体力劳动).                   

English is one of the most important subject in middle school. Almost everyone know that we should learn English well, but few of us know how learn it well. Karl Marx has set a good example for us. He once said," When one is learning the foreign language, he must to use the foreign language." In this way, he could use several language. A saying goes," Practice make perfect." When we learn English, we should  read more, speak more, listen to English by time to time and  practise write every day. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.  Only in this way can we learn it good.                       

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有五处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出漏的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分。

I’m Bill. I’m 13 year old. I love swimming and I can swim well. I often go the swimming club on Saturday. I usually ride my bike there. I also love to play the chess and I’m good at it. On Sunday, I like to play it for my father at home. I think it is interesting but relaxing.