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My favorite sport is playing basketball. In the middle school, I joined in the basketball team. All the teammate practised hard after school. Once our school had match against another school. At the very beginning, we were so nervous which we couldn’t cooperate very good, because this was the first time for us to compete for the school honor. In the half match they fell behind. Our leader calls us together and said that we must get uniting to beat them. Then we tried our best and won the game on last. Play basketball makes me realize the importance of union and team work.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

The teenage year from 13to 19 were the most difficult time for me．They were also the best and worse years in my life．At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself．However，my parents didn’t seem to think such．They always tell me what to do and how to do it．At one time，I ever felt  my parents couldnˈt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them．I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes．Now I am leaving home to college．At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help．

短文改错

请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Our English club was set up two months before. There are 20 members now, includes a teacher. We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have conducted many kinds of activity on English learning.

We held an English story-telling competition in last week. The stories were both presented

in English. Every member took active part in it. Two foreign English teachers are invited

to act as judges. Many members said the activity benefited us in many ways. It not only

made them fluently in spoken English, and also it brought much fun.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

How can a person recover from emotional problems? A popular opinion suggests that he watches humorous films. And a recent study proves this to be wrong. The study also shows that watching at sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job. Emotional experiences is important to people’s well-being. People are less likely to share their feelings with these who have had similar experiences. Similar, people prefer movies that reflect their mood. That’s the reason a sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.

请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I went back to our hometown with my parents during the summer holidays. We spent three hours on the train after a bus took us to the small village.

My grandparents were so glad to see us back home that they prepare a lot of delicious food. We had big dinner with some relatives living nearby. Later, my grandfather showed us in the village. To their great surprise, great changes have been taken place during the last few years. A lot of two-storeyed houses have been built but young trees have been planted. The remote village has taken ona complete new look.

It is clear that the life of common people are getting better and better, which makes us very pleasing.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

(2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr Li is my head teacher. He is now in his thirty and has been teaching in almost ten years. He has much knowledges and his teaching method is scientific. That he teaches us in class leaves a deeply impression on us . All of us have learned a lot. Not only he strict but also he is kind and patient. In addition, he often gave his encouragement to us, but we have made a great progress. As a result, he is popular with our students. We all love him.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I like travelling and my dream of visit Beijing，the capital city of our country，come true during the National Day holidays this year．In October 1st，I went to Tianˈanmen Square with my parents，there we watched the flag-raising ceremony．As I watched flag rising slowly，I sang the national anthem，feeling extremely exciting．Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction，like the Great Wall．Standing on the Great Wall，I felt very proudly．I thought of the old saying that" One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero．"Although I was tired，but I really had a good time．

文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It is known to all that we student today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so weknow few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that.Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. That we have learned in books andin class can’t have the same important effect us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make a progress in both knowledge or practicalability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in their holidays, if possibly.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。    

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。   

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

   1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

   2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday afternoon, I felt ill all of sudden. I was about to get up from the sofa while I felt dizzy as if everything were spinning around. Then my head ached a lot of. That is a kind of feeling you have when you get drunk. I go to the hospital nearby, where I was gave a medical examination. To my relief, there was something seriously wrong with me. The doctor said the symptom was probably caused by too many pressure and tiredness. Now I think it necessarily to forget my work for a little while. I need to taking some exercise every day and find ways to relax me. That really matters.