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71. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to express my views for about the environment in my hometown. My hometown used to being a beautiful place. Thick forests and green grass can be seen everywhere. However, in order to build more house, people cut down more and more trees. With time went by, the forests were seriously destroyed. Besides, because climate change, it rains little now. As the result, sandstorms happen frequently nowadays, from that people suffer a lot. To change the situation, I hope all people should take well care of the forests and plant more trees. Then your living conditions will be improved sooner or later.
Yours,
Li Hua