培养，养育bring       

____(不像)other girls, Shelley looks brave and strong.

Julie:Are you OK, Bill? You look tired.

Bill:Iˈm fine, Julie. I just   (1)  ________ (stay) uplate last night to write an English essay. It istime for me to improve my English writing.

Julie:Read as many things youˈre interested in aspossible,   (2)   ________ soon youˈll realise thatthere are many different ways of saying  (3)  ________ same thing. After all, having avariety of sentence  (4)   ________ (structure) inyour writing makes your English appear better.

Bill:Reading can also broaden my vocabulary. Whatkind of books should I read?

Julie:You can choose books   (5)  ______ (write) bynative speakers. They often contain sentences

  (6)   ________ differ from those commonly seenin English textbooks.

Bill:Good idea. But sometimes I donˈt know what towrite about and find   (7)   ________ hard to writea long essay.

Julie:I suggest you begin by writing short ones abouttopics youˈre interested in, such as movies andsports.

Bill:Yes. Iˈll write something every day.

Julie:Writing all the time is the key   (8)  ________improving your writing.

Bill:Quite right. Practice makes perfect.

Julie:Itˈs   (9)   ________ (easy) said than done. But inthe end, itˈs worth the work youˈve put in.

Bill:Thank you for giving me such   (10)   ________(value) advice.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言

错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My neighbor Trevor was very serious about sport. In the morning, he usual goes cycling but he sometimes goes swimming at the swimming pool. At works, he does exercise during his coffee breaks and he sometimes plays golf in his office! In lunchtime, he plays tennis.     Then, in the evening, he practicesjudo(柔道) for hour or two at the sports center. At the weekend, he also does so much sport as possible. She plays football on Saturdays and basketball on Sundays. In the holidays, he goes skiing in the winter or sailing in the summer. He is a man who love sport more than anyone I have ever been seen!

Jane:What do you want to do thisweekend?

Mary:Iˈm going to the movies with David.What about you? How about61. ________ (go) with us?

Jane:What movies are you planning62. ________ (watch)?

Mary:I havenˈt decided yet. Is thereanything 63. ________ catches youreyes?

Jane:No. In fact, I canˈt think of any goodmovies Iˈd like to see at the moment.

Mary:By 64. ________ way, what is yourfavorite movie?

Jane:Birdman. Actually, it is one ofthe funniest and best movies I65. ________ (see) so far. Suchcomedies are really 66. ________(entertain).

Mary:I prefer thrillers because they reallymake me excited.

Jane:As 67. ________ as I know, few girlslike thrillers. I think most girls like

Korean TV series.

Mary:That is the case. Korean TV series68. ________ (usual) have so many

attractive plots and they say the actorsare handsome and the actresses

beautiful. Perhaps 69. ________ isthese factors that really attract the

teens nowadays. But I donˈt thinkthey are realistic enough.

Jane:I agree. So I used to like Korean TVseries but now I have fallen in love

Mary:No wonder you like Birdman.

   After midnight it began to pour down and we had to stay inside the shelter. 61.________(sudden) we saw a steamboat in the middle of the river62._____the light of the lighting.  We paddled over and climbed on to the sinking steamboat, hoping to get something63.________ (use). To our64.______(astonish), we saw a light and heard one man threatened to kill the other man. Jim 65._______(panic) and ran back to the raft. I remained, feeling curious about 66._______was happening. Learning that the two men wanted to shoot the one 67.________(lie) on the floor, I decided to save the man,68. ________I persuaded Jim to help me paddle away the man’s boat which 69.______ (tie)to the steamboat . When we were a safe distance away, I began to regret 70._______(do) it.

—Both Jeff and David are tall, rich and handsome!

      —U__________ David, Jeff depends on himself to be rich.