假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

There was a time when I was disappointing and helpless. It seemed that I was left behind in school. In addition to, I was facing with many obstacles to study. Fortunately, I read book about gratitude and life. It told many stories about a man overcome difficulties. Inthe book, a sentence moved me deep: when God closes a door, somewhere she opens a window. The sentence gave me power and confident. Before long I learn to taste the joy of life through reading, that really changed my attitude to life.

62.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 Dear Sir,

      I am a student, I have some complaints to make about a poor service of your bookstore.

      In last Sunday, I went there and buy an English dictionary. Unfortunately, I paid and was about to leave after I noticed that some pages were miss. After further inspection, I found some other problem with it and decided that it was poor in quality. Therefore, when I asked the clerk to change it for another one, she simply refused my request, which make me very sad and annoyed. In my opinion, she was a bit rude to his customer.

      My purpose of writing this letter is to complain about your service. Only by improving the quality of your service can customers really have the feeling of treated as “God”.

      Best regards!

                                                                     Yours,

                                                                     Li Ming
(1)________(2)________(3)________(4)________(5)________(6)________(7)________(8)________(9)________(10)________​

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last weekend, my mother and I went to shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoe for me. When we got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didnˈt understand that the foreigner was saying. They looked very worrying. So I decided to help them. I went up to the foreign lady and talked to her by English. I learned that the lady came from Australia and want to buy a pair of running shoes. I told this to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she took her shoes. All of them expressed their thanks to me. And I felt happily that I could help others.

 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.      只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

      I start school when I was five. The classes were small and the teachers were friendly. At the eleven I went to other school. Things didn’t go so well as before. I hated to study subject such as biology and physics and I got terribly marks in tests. My parents tried to teach me that I didn’t understand, but it didn’t help. I got very         worrying about my exams. Even though I spent a lot of time reviewing my lessons, I failed all the exams but had to take them again a few months late. That was the worst year of my school life. But I never gave up. Now I am proud my career as a successful engineer.

     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。  

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I have a good friend who name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the

excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about.  

One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.

She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something

burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out  of her neighborˈs house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. His neighbor was very thankful for her help.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

Dear James,

Thanks for your letter. I'm delight that you're coming over and we're all looking forward to see you again. I can understand you are nervous about travelling by your own. Don't worry! We'll pick you up at the airport. Telling me your flight number and arrival time, and we can meet you while you arrive. Kate wonders if you could bring him some of that wonderful cheese we eat in your parents' house last month. She keep talking about it. I don't think it should be problem bringing it into the country. Let me know as soon as you can book your flight.

Love,

Sandra

（1）________    （2）________    （3）________     （4）________    （5）________

（6）________    （7）________    （8）________     （9）________    （10）________

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The other day, my class had a discussion about the problem of food safety nowadays. We talked about that caused these problems and what measure should be taken to improve the situation. In order to reduce the cost and making more profits, some food companies don' t take necessary steps voluntary to guarantee the food quality.  As a result, more and more low-quality food flows into the market, which do a lot of harm to consumers' health.

    In my opinion, food is essential to our human beings. We cannot live without proper food. The whole nation will suffer a lot unless much attention was paid to food safety. But I call on all the people to take action and put end to the low-quality food. Only in this way can we live for a healthier life.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The internet is playing a important part in our daily life. On the net, we can learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as well. We can also make phone calls, send messages by e-mails, go to net schools, and learn foreign languages by myself. Beside, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and playing chess or cards. The net even help us do shopping, had a chat with others and make friends with them.

In word, the Internet has made our life more easier.

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    假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有

10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处

加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

After you play sports, nothing seems more refreshing than having a can of Coca-Cola or Red Bull. But be carefully – these drinks usually contain a lot of sugar, that can easily lead to obesity. That is because the UK government announced a new tax on sugary drinks on the March 16. Research suggests that sugar play a major role in childhood obesity and that sugary drinks are the bigger source of sugar for children and teenager. The government is hoping the tax will help cut down childhood obesity. The money will be used to funding more sports in school, it says. However, some people disagree the tax. An article points out it can make consumers pay too many and cause them to turn to untaxed sweets.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip. I get up at six o’ clock and we set off by bus. On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked. We all had good time. Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees. It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next , we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air. Finally, we went home at half past four. Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.

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