假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in her early twenty, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, she is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, but playing table tennis. Besides, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping it at home for some time. With such the pen pal, I hope I can share her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.