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I still remember the first day I come to this new school. Everything was new to me, what made me realize I was no longer a small child. I had to depend on me. Luckily, I made several good friend. Their interests were similar with mine. I had great English teacher, Maggie. She let me know the important of English. So I decided to learn English hardly. Although it was very difficult at first, but with the help of my teacher, I made rapidly progress. Just as the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。

    文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

    2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    As is known to we all, America's national pastime is baseball. It has played in this country since the first settlers arrive. It was a national ball what was liked by many Americans at that time. Although baseball possibly developed from an English game, it is now thought of like an American sport. From the Little League to the Major League, player of all skill levels enjoy testing their power on the "Field of Dreams". Famous players, exciting music but the standard stadium food of hot dogs, popcorn and peanuts are popularly among Americans. In a fact, Americans make go to the baseball game a favorite summer outing for many Americans nowadays.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 love .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some People even had to wait outside . My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

A long time ago, there was a British king. One day, the king asked his three daughters how much they loved him, two of 61.________ said they loved him more than anything on the earth.  The third daughter chose not to flatter (奉承) her father with dishonest claims and told him she loved him only as much as her duty as 62.________ daughter required. The king believed the two dishonest daughters and gave them 63.________ kingdom. He told the honest daughter that she was ungrateful and made her leave his kingdom so she travelled 64. ________ the sea to France.

The king then went to live with his eldest daughter, 65. ________(bring) a hundred soldiers to look after him. But the eldest 66. ________(demand) that he should reduce the number of soldiers to fifty. The king was angry and went to live with his second daughter instead. But the second daughter was no different, and even 67. ________(far) reduced his soldiers to twenty-five. The king then went backwards and forwards between the two daughters 68. ________ he had no soldiers at all.

The youngest daughter, hearing 69. ________ had happened to her father, gathered an army and defeated her two sisters. She then put the old king back on his throne. When the king died 70. ________ (peaceful) in his sleep, the honest daughter became crowned queen.

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下边写出改正后的词。共有10处错误，若超出10处错误，11处开始不记分。注意：在答题卡上做答。

This morning, I go to the store near my home to do some shopping. I gave a violently cough while I was walking down the passage. The woman standing next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil. For that moment, a girl was walking by. She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor. After a while, there were blood pour down her face. I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay. The doctor examined her wound carefully. To my relief, it was not serious. The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound.