假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

 I’m greatly honored to introduce Shanghai to you. Locating in the east of China, Shanghai is one of the biggest city in the world. Besides, as is known to all is that Shanghai is a financial center of our country. South of Shanghai stood the Oriental Pearl Radio and Television Tower, which is a landmark of the city. At night, what we can see at the top of the tower is breathtaking view. In terms of the place where fascinates visitors most, the Bund looks the most beautifully. Compared it with the Bund, Yu Garden attracts me more so it is a good place where you can taste all kinds of delicious food. All in all, Shanghai is amazing and you can visit it on person.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I have learned that you would hold a discussion this Saturday afternoon. I am writing this letter express my deepest regret.

The reason for my absence is because I have to meet some foreign friend from Australia this Saturday afternoon. Their plane is due to arriving then and it is impossible to rearrange my time. It is really a pity that I will miss so a valuable opportunity to share my thoughts to you about Frog by Mo Yan. In addition, I wonder that if you could send me a summary of the discussion next Monday and I promise to return them as soon as possible.

I’m true sorry for my absence and hope that you can understand me.

                                                        Yours,

                                                         Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My family was very poor when I was a child. My parents lost their jobs or lived with heavy pressure. As a result, I wanted to study hardly so as to have different future. During my high school life, I spent all my time studied those difficult subjects, which made me one of the best student in our school. Before graduation, I was admitted into a key university. I meet a lot of interesting friends there. Now, I am working in a big company and I am unable to afford anything I want. What’s more, my parents also have been found new jobs. So I believe that our dream will came true if we try our best.

Every possible means ____ been tried, and we find only ____ this means can we do it well.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

How can a person recover from emotional problems? A popular opinion suggests that he watches humorous films. And a recent study proves this to be wrong. The study also shows that watching at sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job. Emotional experiences is important to people’s well-being. People are less likely to share their feelings with these who have had similar experiences. Similar, people prefer movies that reflect their mood. That’s the reason a sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear James，

     Thanks for your letter. I’m delight that you’re coming over and we’re all looking forward to see you again. I can understand you are nervous about traveling by your own. Don’t worry! We’ll pick you up at the airport. Telling me your flight number and arrival time, and we can meet you while you arrive. Kate wonders if you could bring him some of the wonderful cheese we eat in your parents’ house last month. She keep talking about it. I don’t think it should be problem bringing it into the country. Let me know as soon as you will book your flight.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

Last summer I go to London for my holiday. I spent just two week there. While I was staying there, I visited many places of interest and had lots of friend talks with all kinds of people. I found a very interested thing there. One of my Chinese friends have been living in London and she told us that many English families don’t like to buy new television sets. They can borrow TV sets in many shops there. The shops are often full with many people. There they can borrow a TV set very easy, but it costs them only a little. Then it can be taken to home and used for a long time.

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tom was one of my classmate in middle school. He works very hard and was good in his studies. Our teachers liked him very much. So he wasnˈt happy. He often looked very sadly. I wanted to know the reason. One day, I asked him, “What keep me so upset every day?” After talking with him, I learned that his father had never encouraged him. No matter what well he did in his studies, his father said he hadnˈt been tried hard enough. I was very surprised after listening to that. Encouragement is very important. Harmful words can be very harmful. Lucky, Tomˈs father changed later and Tom finally became happy boy．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday afternoon, I felt ill all of sudden. I was about to get up from the sofa while I felt dizzy as if everything were spinning around. Then my head ached a lot of. That is a kind of feeling you have when you get drunk. I go to the hospital nearby, where I was gave a medical examination. To my relief, there was something seriously wrong with me. The doctor said the symptom was probably caused by too many pressure and tiredness. Now I think it necessarily to forget my work for a little while. I need to taking some exercise every day and find ways to relax me. That really matters.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently, a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact, this happens in many place of interest. I had some suggestions to solve this problem.   First, make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti (涂鸦). Besides, punishments, such as a fine, is necessary to tourists with so bad behaviors. Also, I think it's helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages.  I'm sure with our efforts, more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.