假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

All students need to have good habits. Unless you have good habits, you can learn very well and quickly.

Do you like to study in the living room, that is not a good place? The living room is too much noisy, and you need the quiet place. A quiet place can help you focusing on what you are doing. Remembered when you study, don’t think about other things at the same time. For example , when you do your homeworks, only think about it. By this way, you can learn more efficiently .

Good study habits is very helpful to us. We are supposed try to learn them.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Wei hua,

   I know you are very annoying about your results in the midterm examination. I’ve just read an useful article about how a positive attitude affect our behavior. 

Naturally, fail an examination can be very discouraging. If you think too many about the past, you will never be able focus on what is more important for now and the future. Life is full of difficulties, but anyone may suffer setbacks(挫折). We must take a positive attitude towards the things that we had to deal with. The greatly dreams will come true if we make an effort. Just work hard and prepare for another chance.

You will make for it.

Yours,

Janet

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其正下方写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The old saying “The early bird catches the worm.” show us the importance of planning, working hard and trying constant. To achieve outstanding results, the most people must plan ahead and work hard to overcome all kind of difficulties.

That has been my own experience, either. When I first started at high school, I seldom past my exams, so I never prepared well. Later, my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me plan everything in advance. She asked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice onto practice, I can now easily pass all my exams.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I am chosen to play the leading role in the play, which was my dream. As a shy and thin girl, I used to being quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encouraged myself to do so. Now I have changed great. In class, I am often the first one to stand up or answer questions even if I may make some mistakes. No pains, no gains. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and has changed into a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face and only in this way can we make progresses.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Every boy and every girl are eager for success. But what can we succeed in life? Here are my opinions:

First, we must be friendly and kindly. It allows us to make friends but survive wherever we are. Second, we must set a goal, which motivates us to pursue our dreams. Third, it’s better to believe in us. Only with self-confidence we realize our goals. Fourth, we should develop good characters, such as a strong will and diligence, because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble.

As far as I’m concerning, success belongs to those who keep on trying. So let’s take actions now!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。&;

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mum,

This afternoon, our teacher asked us list what our parents had done for us. I write down a lot of good sides. Time passes quickly, isn’t it? It is three years when I became a high school student. Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far, I really appreciate for your support. I know that without your properly guidance, I would not have done so well.

However, what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true. Please continue to lend I a hand. I really need your help.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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I just come back from Britain last week. I was lucky enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much old buildings. The Lake District was beautifully, but it was a pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 Considering to be the greatest writer of plays in theEnglish—spokenworld ,William Shakespeare isveryfamous today than heisin his own lifetime . Nowadays , his playsisread and performed throughout the world . His plays make peopletolaugh and cry , sometimes at same time . Shakespeare attended a local schoolthathe learned Greek and Latin grammar ,literature and history . Duringhertime in London he wrote manyplay .

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉

修改：在错误的词下画一横线（______），并在横线下面 写出修改后的词

（注意：文中共10处错误，从第11处开始不计分。）

I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the cinema, I met an English woman, she had lost her way.  I gave up the chance see the film and take her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had taken place here in the past few years and she told me something about her country.  Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happily, for I had not only helped her out of trouble and practiced   my speaking English. If I had not worked hard at English, I would not have been able to help him.     

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students.

We have a large and clean house, which lay in a beautiful area of our city. I’m good at English and my parents are all professors of English, so that I’m sure we won’t have any difficulty communicating with English speakers. My father is a excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest on our own car. Last month we received two American students. We had a wonderfully time. However, my mother cooks well, so the students can be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food. I would greatly appreciate if I could have the chance to make friend with them.

Thanks for your listening. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua