I am English student studying in China. Yesterday, I go to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, and I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema. First, the film was delayed as there was so many advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was such loud that I could hardly bear it. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, that presented potential safety problems. If something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quick. As a visitor to you city, I’m disappointed with my experience in you cinema. I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and to make some improvements. 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I remember that during the summer holidays, the weather was hot and I could not do many work, but I lived happy. In the morning I usually get up early and took a walk in the garden. After breakfast, I began read English and did some exercises in math. I worked hardly and made a great progress. I spent nearly the whole afternoon outside. I went swimming on the river and didn’t come back when it was about five or six. Sometimes a friend of me would come to see me and we would spend some hours listening to music. In this way I spent my holidays happily. I not only studied well and but also became a good swimmer.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I went shopping yesterday afternoon. It is seven o’clock when I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passengers, all of which kept silent. A mother with her little son was sitting nearby. All of sudden, the son cried loud. The mother tried to do what she could to make him stop crying. Thus, the son went on crying. After a long time, a man sitting next of the mother said angrily, “Why don’t you give the child what he wants it.” The mother answered quietly, “I would if I could, and what he wants is your hat.” Heard this, all the passenger burst into laughter.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

     2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It is known to all that we student today have to fix our attention to our lessons, so we know few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we have learned in books and in class can’t have the same important effect us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make a progress in both knowledge or practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in their holidays, if possibly.

 71.  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

        2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   Before I go on holiday, I always go online to look up the information I need. First, I look up possible destination and compare them to see that one suits my needs best. Then I checked the cost. Though I'm going by plane, I have to compare prices but I can get the cheapest tickets. I don't like traveling by bus, because the high rate of traffic accidents. I need to check hotels as well as. I am used to stay at cheap hotels. Finally, I try to plan how many I need to spend on meals. If I plan my trip careful, I can have a good time.

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students.

We have a large and clean house, which lay in a beautiful area of our city. I’m good at English and my parents are all professors of English, so that I’m sure we won’t have any difficulty communicating with English speakers. My father is a excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest on our own car. Last month we received two American students. We had a wonderfully time. However, my mother cooks well, so the students can be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food. I would greatly appreciate if I could have the chance to make friend with them.

Thanks for your listening. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

(2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My brother is a Harvard graduate work in a multinational company. Recently, the company had failed several times in its attempts to break into the Chinese market. As a new manager in the charge of the sales department, he is trying every possible mean to promote their products. Because he has taken some effective measures, their profits are expected to rise at 30%. I am real proud of my brother. What’s more, he has promised to give me five thousand yuan until my summer holidays come. If not, I will be able to afford go travelling. How a wonderful piece of news!

     增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

     删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

     修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

 注意：1, 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

           2, 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Diary,   

Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.

Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

                                                        Yours,

                                                        Rosemary