增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

  2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’ll never forget the story which happen on a bus the other day. It was a wind day. I got on the bus after school. A young lady was standing next to me. In a flash, a strong wind blew through the window. A lady’s false hair was blown away. To our surprises, she was hairless. While she was wondering what to do it, many passengers laughed loudly. So she managed to hold back her tears. Saw this, I picked up her false hair and said, “Don’t sad, Miss. I’m sure your hair will grow soon.” When I glanced to other passengers, they all quick nodded their heads with shame.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在多出来的单词上画一斜杠（﹨）

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear editor,

    I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduate. Nowadays many of graduates are looking forward to obtain employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.

    As the matter of fact, there is not enough opportunities to satisfy the most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are bad needed and a lot of posts are waiting us. Rural areas are a vast world, which you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.

    Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as you have in the city.

有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\） 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者 （从第 11 处起） 不计分。

 Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

As a boy grown up in India, I had longed to traveling abroad. I used to listen to the 

stories my father told me about her stay in Canada and trips to Europe in 1970s. My big 

moment finally come in the summer of 1998 when I was able to accompany my parents to 

Europe, which my father was to attend  a meeting. The service during the flight to Frankfurt 

was such nice that even today I can still remember them. The flight was really smooth and 

thorough enjoyable, even for someone as me, who is otherwise scared of flying.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

  During the vacation, the weather was hot and I could not do much work, but I lived happily. On the morning I usually got up early and take a walk in the garden. After the breakfast, I began reading English and did some exercise in maths. I worked quite hardly and made good progress. I spent nearly the whole afternoon outside. I went swim in the river and didn’t come back when it was about five or six. Sometimes a friend of me would come to see me and we would spend some hours listened to music. In this way I spent my vacation happily. I not only studied well but also became good swimmer. 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, mobile payment is becoming more and more popular with our shopping. In addition to pay in cash, by cheque or credit card, a consumer can use a mobile phone to pay for a wide range of services and goods. Compared with those traditional mean, mobile payment is faster and more convenient. Besides, it can be used at any given time or place, thus save much time and energy. Furthermore, we can’t overlook the fact it must be operated with a phone and a network. And it is only recently which the technology to support such systems has become wide available. It will be arouse public concern over its potential risk, such as the account security and other unexpected problems. Technology is changing its life rapidly, so we should get ready for it.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。  

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On July twenty­seventh last summer，I as well as my brother leave for Tianjin in order to go to Jay’s concert. I was very fond of Jay’s songs but I couldn’t wait to see him. When we arrived the center of the water stadium，the large number of people were waiting there. We met a few fans of Jay’s at the stadium in where we took some picture with them. We were waiting for Jay，smiled and excited. Finally，at 8 o’ clock in the evening，Jay turned up slow among the cheers of all fans. Dressing in a blue coat，Jay sang many more beautiful songs.

Following my rhythm，I sang to music. Finally，the conce rt ended up with a famous song by Jay.