假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Smoking does great harm to people’s healthy. It can cause people to suffer from many different kind of illness. Thousands of people in the world die of lung cancer in every year. They are most smokers. When people smoke, poisonous gases are giving off and the air around us is polluted, With the standard of culture raising, more and more people come to realize that smoking is not good, and decide to give it up. How to get rid smoking is still a serious problem. I think that this is certainly important for people to know that smoking is harmful to their health but at the same time, government should make the rule that where there are other people, nobody can smoke, or he’ll be punished.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  When I look at this picture of myself．I realize of how fast time flies．I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years．About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club．Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time；car magazines and musical instruments．I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums．This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改所写故事，请你修改你同桌写的以下故事。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

    修改：在错的词后划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to visit there for a long time. It is one of the most beautiful city all over the world. There are many places of interest that you can learn them in school. Iˈd also like to see the Empire State Building. Unfortunate, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11, 2001, and I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be unforgettable experience.

文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后词。         

Dear Susan,

I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

Yours,

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

       My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Steven was from a poor family. His parents couldn’t afford buy him many basic things that he needed them. Once our school provided gloves for poor child, I put his name on the list. He was quite happy that he received a pair.

  Steven had a gift in painting and he could easy understand what I described in class. I often show his paintings to the class. He was greatly encouraged. Later he was admitted to outstanding university. After graduation from the university, he had many difficulties, but he never gave up. He was always trying his best to improve himself. His hard work and strong mind led to succeed.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意： 每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。

It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That's okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures. J．K. Rowling, wrote Harry Potter, had her first Harry Potter book reject 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that's because I succeed.”

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误只涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词，每句中最多有两处错误；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11出）不计分。

This morning, my English teacher told us an interested story. During World War II, one day Churchill has to go to the BBC to make important speech to the nation. An hour before the time of his speech, he stopped a taxi and ask the driver to take him to the BBC. But the taxi driver, who didn’t recognize him, said he could not take him anywhere, so he wanted to go back home to hear Churchill make a speech in the radio.Churchill was such pleased when he heard this answer that he gave the man a pound, which was worth of quite a lot in those days. “ All right, get in.” said the driver excited. “ I’ll take him. I’m sure Churchill’s speech will be boring.”

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

  A little kid fell into a lake while she was playing with her little friends.They were too frightening to know what to do next.Unfortunately,a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl.The man immediate dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at a same time,the lady called the ambulance on time.Before the ambulance came,the lady,who proved to be a nurse,performing first aid to the kid.A few of minutes later,the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved.The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of differences.From it,we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better preparing for an emergency.

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I joined a book club recently. In the book club, we decide on a book to read but we read it at the same time. When we had finished the book, we get together and discuss it. We can also hear different people points of view. We even realize anything about the story that we have not thought about it. Join a book club is also great way to meet new people. It is important to choose the right one. Make sure that the people in your group are interesting in the same kind of books. Beside, make sure that the people in your group read on the same speed as you do.