2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 Dear Peter,

     With the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.

One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often used when you quite approve for someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they like. The phrase Miaosha first comes from online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in the very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean he is very rich.

     You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.

       All the best!  

                                                               Yours,
                                                               Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sarah,

Iˈm writing because I want apologise about last Friday.

Iˈm really sorry, but I would have met you on time if everything hadnˈt gone wrongly! I didnˈt get there until 9 oˈclock, because my watch breaks and I didnˈt know what time it was. Then I had to walk because Iˈd missed the bus. Believing it or not, I fell over a cat and my trousers became dirt, so I had to go home again! Then I decided to catch other bus, but it arrived late.

I hope you arenˈt too angry about me. Can us go out another day? Would you like to come with me to Andyˈs party on next Saturday night?

Looking forward to hear from you.

Jack

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

  During the vacation, the weather was hot and I could not do much work, but I lived happily. On the morning I usually got up early and take a walk in the garden. After the breakfast, I began reading English and did some exercise in maths. I worked quite hardly and made good progress. I spent nearly the whole afternoon outside. I went swim in the river and didn’t come back when it was about five or six. Sometimes a friend of me would come to see me and we would spend some hours listened to music. In this way I spent my vacation happily. I not only studied well but also became good swimmer. 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

    Itˈs my honor to give a speech here. After-class activities play a important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.

    Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior one, I become a member of our drama club, that I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club, I achieved a lot.

    These activities bring me a lot of funs, provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so much advantages shown above, why not to join us at once?

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。  

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On July twenty­seventh last summer，I as well as my brother leave for Tianjin in order to go to Jay’s concert. I was very fond of Jay’s songs but I couldn’t wait to see him. When we arrived the center of the water stadium，the large number of people were waiting there. We met a few fans of Jay’s at the stadium in where we took some picture with them. We were waiting for Jay，smiled and excited. Finally，at 8 o’ clock in the evening，Jay turned up slow among the cheers of all fans. Dressing in a blue coat，Jay sang many more beautiful songs.

Following my rhythm，I sang to music. Finally，the conce rt ended up with a famous song by Jay.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2   只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

For a person, belief always plays an important role in his life. Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorfully life. Otherwise, he will lose him in his own way of life. Belief is so important what it can change one’s fate. Marie Curie, famous scientist, also has set a good example. In 1898, Marie find a new element. In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hardly. At last they saw at the dim blue light of new element—radium, which made her dream came true.

To my personal view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to getting successful and master his own life.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该同下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      On Wednesday evening, we went to the Town Hall. It was the last day of the year and a largely crowd of people had gathered under the Town Hall clock. It would be strike twelve in twenty minutes' time. Fifteen minute passed and then, at five to twelve, a clock stopped. The big minute hand did not moved. We waited and waited, so nothing happened. Suddenly someone shouts, "It's two minutes past twelve ! The clock has stopped!" I looked at mine watch. It was true. The big clock refused welcome the New Year. At that moment, everybody began to laugh and singing.

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do anything meaningful instead of staying at home, so I was got a job at a restaurant, worked there as a cleaner. I worked seven hour a day for three weeks. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it in half way, but I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home lately in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term begins. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really successful experience.

（1） As he has no opportunity to achieve his _____(雄心), he intends to resign from the company.

（2） He ____（渴望）to be a famous designer.

（3）Our view of the question is _____(相反) to theirs.

（4）The film is ___（改编）from one of Han Han’s novels.

（5）As we know, Yang Liwei is a famous and successful ____（宇航员）.