假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It has been several week since I came to my new school. It was a clean beautiful and modern one, with a large playground and an amazed digital reading-room. Al1 the teachers are friendly and kindly. Among them, I like my English teacher best, who is enthusiastic but popular with us. He is also strict to us. He teaches us in an unusual way. Besides, he always avoids making us to feel embarrassed in class. All my classmates works hard. We're enjoying such new life and trying to develop us for the future.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。

    文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

    2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Diana,

    Yesterday my friend David came round with a new game and asked to play it by my dad's computer. I was a little worried, because my dad used it mainly for his work, and I'm only allowed to use it for my homework. It happened when my dad was out, so we tried out the game. After playing, I took it off the computer. However, when I restarted computer, I found some of my dad's documents miss. Later in the afternoon, my dad used the computer, but couldn't find the document in it. He became very angry, but I dared not to tell him about the game. Now I'm feeling regretful and disturbing. I'm not sure whether a computer's repair shop can get the documents back. Should I tell him the truth, and should I pay to repair it'?. I wish for your advice.

Steve

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

    (1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    (2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

  Dear Jack,

Welcome to my school! Upon your arrival, there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life. You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you. The host family will also show you around some famous scenic spot. You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites. There are varieties of kites to choose. So isn’t that a good idea to buy some for your friends?

Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.

                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,

                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

The “only child” policy had been changed in our country so far. It is possible that some of us may have a brother or sister. In a survey about the acceptance of a sibling, most of my classmate say yes. They are very glad to have a companion at home, with which they will no longer feel lonely. In addition, learn to offer help to others can also benefit them. However, the few who say no is afraid that their parents would love them less whether they had a sibling.
    As for me, if I have a younger brother or sister at home, his life will be full of happiness. For one thing, a little child is a great fun and I can play with him or her cheerful. For another, I will share my life an intimate friend. How nice it is to grow up with a sibling!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

About 57.63 percent of people consider that the goods online is cheaper than in real stores, and they can easy get what they want. Some people prefer to shopping online and others think it is insecure. Around 46.59 percent of people think they often risk buy low-quality goods on the line. Bad service together with low-quality goods are constantly complained. The safety of paying online is another public concern, either. There is no denying that whether your attitude towards online shopping is, it is becoming a trend in our life. 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

①、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

Dear Sir,

I’m Li Hua, one of the student who attended the course English Film Appreciation in last term. I like it very much mainly for the two reasons. First, in the class, we are exposed to different kinds of English films, that help us improve both our English listening or speaking. Equally attractive is the amazing stories of heroes, because they show us how a person can work hardly to make a difference.

As a young student, I suggest that the teacher choose some more films that appeal to our teenagers, thus making the course more interested. Besides, more activities should be included so that we can have many chances to practice our English.

I’d appreciate if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I hope that the course will become more popular.

                                                               Yours Sincerely

                                                               Li Hua