假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。&;

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mum,

This afternoon, our teacher asked us list what our parents had done for us. I write down a lot of good sides. Time passes quickly, isn’t it? It is three years when I became a high school student. Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far, I really appreciate for your support. I know that without your properly guidance, I would not have done so well.

However, what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true. Please continue to lend I a hand. I really need your help.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，

As summer vacation is come soon, my classmates is trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they come here, I will show they around my university and the city as well as. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprise for them. My parents had done a lot for me, and I think it is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last weekend, my mother and I went to shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoe for me. When we got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didnˈt understand that the foreigner was saying. They looked very worrying. So I decided to help them. I went up to the foreign lady and talked to her by English. I learned that the lady came from Australia and want to buy a pair of running shoes. I told this to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she took her shoes. All of them expressed their thanks to me. And I felt happily that I could help others.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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I just come back from Britain last week. I was lucky enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much old buildings. The Lake District was beautifully, but it was a pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.

     Several days later, Li Hua, one of my roommates, bought a bag of snacks from a supermarket. We invited to enjoy them. However, after calling, all of us get poisoned and had stomachaches with our face pale. We were quick sent to a nearby hospital. A doctor examined us and gave some medicine. Unfortunately, we were out of danger soon after taking medicine. This accident made me to realize the seriousness of the food safe problem. I sincerely hope that the whole society should take notice food safety.

My list of favorite books are long. I read a lot and I just keep finding new favorites. In my family, we often talk about the books we are reading and passing around our favorites. It benefits a whole family.

   I discovered how share favorite books could help strength a friendship long ago. When I was a kid, my friend Liz became very sicker and was going to miss a lot of school. I fill a big bag with some of my favorite books for her read. She never forgot that. Today, she lives thousand of miles away from me, but she sometimes e-mails with me about the books she is reading.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 Considering to be the greatest writer of plays in theEnglish—spokenworld ,William Shakespeare isveryfamous today than heisin his own lifetime . Nowadays , his playsisread and performed throughout the world . His plays make peopletolaugh and cry , sometimes at same time . Shakespeare attended a local schoolthathe learned Greek and Latin grammar ,literature and history . Duringhertime in London he wrote manyplay .

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

  （1） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   Television plays important part in our life. It shows us information programme, like the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for another things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our lives ever since.

  （2） 最近,你班就高考后的暑假打算展开了一次讨论。有的想打工挣钱以便继续到大学学习;有的打算学习一门技术去挣钱养家;有的想和同学一起去旅游。你想在家陪家人待两周放松身心,然后去自己喜欢的上海看看,以便选择一个喜欢的大学在那里继续学习。这个暑假对大多数同学而言都意味着新生活的开始。

要求:1．词数100左右;

2．开头已给出,不计入总词数;

3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

   We're going to finish our middle school in June after the important College Entrance Examination. Recently, our class has a heat discussion on what to do in this real summer holiday.________