假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：

1．毎处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2． 只允许修改10处．多者（从第11处起）不计分．

    During my last winter holiday， I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents． I find a big change there． The first time I went there， they were living in a small house with dogs， ducks， and another animals． Last winter when I went here again， they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken． They also had a small pond which they raised fish． My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish． I felt happily that their life had improved． At the end of our trip， I told my father that I planned to return for every two years， but he agreed．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改．

      增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．

      删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

      修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

      注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

                 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

    When I was little，Friday's night was our family game night．After supper，we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room．As the kid，I loved to watch cartoons，but no matter how many times I asked to watching them，my parents would not to let me．They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain．Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes．I didn't realize how right my parents are until I entered high school．The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

           2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

    It was Monday morning， and the writing class had just begin． Everyone was silent， wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud． Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity； others were nervous and anxious． I had done myself homework， but I was shy． I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people． At that moment， I remembered that my father once said， " The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks， and mistake as well．" Immediate， I raised my hand．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言锚误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

It is Mother’s Day today．Though it’s a western festival，it’s popular in China now．

Mom has a full﹣time job，so she has to do most of the houseworks．She is a great mother．Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day．We get up early in the morning．Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping．When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand．I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen．The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest．At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

The teenage year from 13to 19 were the most difficult time for me．They were also the best and worse years in my life．At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself．However，my parents didn’t seem to think such．They always tell me what to do and how to do it．At one time，I ever felt  my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them．I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes．Now I am leaving home to college．At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help．