注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

I am writing to invite you and your classmates to China to the study tour on behalf for our school.  Indeed, I want to see you very much.

Our school will prepare some tour study activity. At the first, we will attend the public speech in Tian’anmen. After that, we will interview some top students in Tsinghua and Beijing University, which will provide some effective learn methods.  What’s more, you will be showing around the Great Wall, which is one of the worldwide wonder.  During the study tour, you will carry some city tasks.

After the study tour, I will invite you to my home, experienced further Chinese lifestyle.  I sincerely hope you will have a good understanding of Chinese culture from the study tour.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

       增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

       删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

       修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   In our life, everyone is surely to have difficulties. It is the same with me. I still remember how worried I am about my English learning three years ago. I found it difficult to following my teacher in the English class. Beside, my classmates often laughed at me because my poor English. So I was determined to do something about it. Firstly, I took a part in the English Corner that I met many friends. They willing shared their methods of learning English with me. I also found it useful to keep English diaries. What's more, you talked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English. As a result, I made great progresses in learning English.

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

    (1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    (2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

  Dear Jack,

Welcome to my school! Upon your arrival, there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life. You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you. The host family will also show you around some famous scenic spot. You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites. There are varieties of kites to choose. So isn’t that a good idea to buy some for your friends?

Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.

                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,

                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

The “only child” policy had been changed in our country so far. It is possible that some of us may have a brother or sister. In a survey about the acceptance of a sibling, most of my classmate say yes. They are very glad to have a companion at home, with which they will no longer feel lonely. In addition, learn to offer help to others can also benefit them. However, the few who say no is afraid that their parents would love them less whether they had a sibling.
    As for me, if I have a younger brother or sister at home, his life will be full of happiness. For one thing, a little child is a great fun and I can play with him or her cheerful. For another, I will share my life an intimate friend. How nice it is to grow up with a sibling!

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

     I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said,
“That’s it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.

In my mind, I could never fancy how ten second of life could change a person’s view for his

whole existence. A few years ago I experience the worst moment in my life. I was driving home that

afternoon. Unfortunately, I didn’t make it home as usually because I had a car accident. While I was

 driving, all of a sudden, but the car in front of me stopped. My car immediately ran into it. Luckily, I

wasn’t serious hurt. That accident changed way I drive and they taught me a valuable lesson. I also

came to the conclusion which life needs to be treasuring.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。注意：在答题卡上做答。

  I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage（车厢） was noise and filled with people.
     Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled delightedly at his success.
     No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；  2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   I love camping. It is my favouritest way to spend the summer vacation.Last year，my families and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the excited experiences I had never had.We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day.We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully.For a whole week，I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At the night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees，and I feel so peaceful.It doesnˈt cost many to camp.I believe itˈs the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

     As new students at an university in Boston, many of us were unfamiliar with the campus but frequently late for class. One professor, however, was absolute against being late, making clear that no excuse would be acceptable. So when a girl student came in his class one morning late, we expected the worst results. It left the professor so annoyed that he demands the reason. "The reason is that my waiting online to buy your new book." She replied very nervously. Delight at being admired, the professor asked the rest of the class, "Well, how were not the rest of you late?"

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

About 57.63 percent of people consider that the goods online is cheaper than in real stores, and they can easy get what they want. Some people prefer to shopping online and others think it is insecure. Around 46.59 percent of people think they often risk buy low-quality goods on the line. Bad service together with low-quality goods are constantly complained. The safety of paying online is another public concern, either. There is no denying that whether your attitude towards online shopping is, it is becoming a trend in our life.