假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

  2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mr. Green is a London taxi driver who love going to the theater. Last week his mother gave her two tickets for play. The tickets were for Sunday evening. Then Mr. Green read some reviews of the play, that said it was a terribly one! He wouldn't go to see the play that no one liked. So two hours after the beginning of the play, he left the tickets on the back seat of his taxi. He thought perhaps someone who wanted to see the play would take it. However ,when Mr. Green went back to home, the tickets were still there .On fact, there were four tickets on the seat. Someone had placed another pair of ticket on top of them!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改所写故事，请你修改你同桌写的以下故事。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

    修改：在错的词后划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to visit there for a long time. It is one of the most beautiful city all over the world. There are many places of interest that you can learn them in school. Iˈd also like to see the Empire State Building. Unfortunate, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11, 2001, and I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be unforgettable experience.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改所写故事，请你修改你同桌写的以下故事。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词后划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to visit there for a long time. It is one of the most beautiful city all over the world. There are many places of interest that you can learn them in school. Iˈd also like to see the Empire State Building. Unfortunate, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11, 2001, and I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be unforgettable experience.

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线_____，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意： 1  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2        只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear John,

   I am extreme sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to go to your party and sharing your happy experience abroad. Much to my regret, I will be absent from our party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Examination are just around the corner, for which I am now really busy prepared. What’s worse, I have caught bad cold lately and I am really not myself.

  Anyway, we would have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam? I am truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and to accept my sincere apology.

  I’m looking forward to your reply.

                                                        Yours,

                                                         Mike

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m one of the students in our class who has ever been to England. Last summer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study. As soon as I arrived on England by plane, I was picked up by the Smiths, which I would live with for the next two weeks. We felt like a fish out of water when I got there. The Smiths did what they could make me feel at home. I study at an international school, where I met friend from all over the world. I seized the opportunity to practise my speak English. Soon I made such a rapid progress that I received highly praise from all the people around.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Susan,                                                               

Thank you for your letter. Due to the fact that I am on business in another city, I couldn’t answer to your letter directly after I received it. Now I am write to tell you what my city has done to reduce traffic jams in the recent year. First of all, four subways and an expressway has been built in my city in order to ease the heavy traffic. Second, public transportation has been improved to make more convenient for people to take buses. However, the parking fee is raised in the downtown, it helps to reduce the number of cars coming in and out. Now there are more buses and few cars in my city. The traffic is flowing smooth during the rush hour. Can you tell me something about the traffic in your city? Expecting your reply!  

Jack

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

   One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish．

Felt hungry，we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 

       2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

For students learned instruments, summer is always a “musical season”. During vacation time, we are always busy attending various of lessons, taking exams and participating in contests. This summer I joined in a music contest but was lucky to get the second place. It was the first time that l have played on the stage. In front of the stage was my excited schoolmates. Facing such many people. I felt very upset at first, but the encouragement to my teacher kept me going ahead.

Fortunate, I was given a silver medal, that increased my confidence. In short, nothing is impossible to willing heart.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Every boy and every girl are eager for success. But what can we succeed in life? Here are my opinions:

First, we must be friendly and kindly. It allows us to make friends but survive wherever we are. Second, we must set a goal, which motivates us to pursue our dreams. Third, it’s better to believe in us. Only with self-confidence we realize our goals. Fourth, we should develop good characters, such as a strong will and diligence, because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble.

As far as I’m concerning, success belongs to those who keep on trying. So let’s take actions now!