假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Many of us feel somehow nervously whenever we are taking an important exam. Nervousness not only does harm to students’ health but also disturb their studies. So it’s necessary for students to feel relaxing. I think it’s very important to have a right attitude for exams. Exams are only means of checking what we have learned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams. Besides, you should make a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind before the exam, that help to reduce the pressure from the exam. We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music. Besides, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well as.

Follow my advices and you will enjoy your school life.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

  增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

  删除：把多余的词用斜线（划掉．

  修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

  注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

        2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

 The Lantern Festival fell on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month．As earlier as the Western Han Dynasty，it became a festival with great significance．

This dayˈs important activity is watch lanterns．Lanterns of various shapes and sizes are showing in the street．"Guessing lantern riddles"are an essential part of the Festival．People will eat that is called yuanxiao on this day. Yuanxiao also has other name，tangyuan，that in Chinese has a similar pronunciation--"tuanyuan"．But people eat yuanxiao，looking forward union，harmony and happiness for the family．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改所写故事，请你修改你同桌写的以下故事。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

    修改：在错的词后划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to visit there for a long time. It is one of the most beautiful city all over the world. There are many places of interest that you can learn them in school. Iˈd also like to see the Empire State Building. Unfortunate, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11, 2001, and I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be unforgettable experience.

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Steven,

    I’m glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation. You asked many question in your letter, and now let me answer them.

    To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history. You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope you will enjoy them. Besides, there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City. These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.

                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor sine I entered into the primary school. Nowadays, with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in great need at home and abroad.

My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I’ll concentrate more to studies. After all, only by working hardly can one succeed.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mary,

I’m glad to hear of you. Learning that you had developed a deep interest in Tang poems, I feel happiness and proud and I’d like to give you a brief introduction to them.

In China, Tang poems are popular with people of all ages. The Tang dynasty is common recognized as the golden age of poetry. During this period, a lot of excellent poems was written. Tang poems are easy to read but recite. Some of them have translated into many foreign languages.

Now that you are interesting in Tang poems, I will send you a collection of Tang poem by post. I hope you will love it.

Best wished!

                                                                                                   Yours,

                                                                                                   Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The other day, I was praising by my teacher at the class meeting. He says before the whole class that only if we put our heart into our lessons could we make a great progress. He also said I set a good example to all of my classmate and that I memorized all the words of Unit 1 as if I was not good at English. He also added that anyone should learn from me. Heard what the teacher said, I was more than glad and my heart beat wild. At the same time, I made my mind to study harder. From my own experience, I’ve learned that several words of praise can makes a great difference to someone.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I look at this picture of myself．I realize of how fast time flies．I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years．About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club．Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time；car magazines and musical instruments．I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums．This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days．

      71.  Mr. Zhang, who is our new teacher, so concerned about us that we all like her. But there was a time that I disliked English. Sometimes, I even did many things not concerned study at class. As a result, I went through several failure. Later she happened to discover it and talk to me face to face. To make me like English, she never got tiring of telling me how to learn English well. She encouraged us to keep a journal in English and try to set down what I saw and heard. Thanks for my English teacher , I have made a great progress and am getting along well with my English study. This is the first time that I had not been afraid of English any more.