假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其正下方写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The old saying “The early bird catches the worm.” show us the importance of planning, working hard and trying constant. To achieve outstanding results, the most people must plan ahead and work hard to overcome all kind of difficulties.

That has been my own experience, either. When I first started at high school, I seldom past my exams, so I never prepared well. Later, my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me plan everything in advance. She asked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice onto practice, I can now easily pass all my exams.

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；

     2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     3．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last weekend, my family and I went to visit Harbin, beautiful city. In arriving there, we were fascinated by it’s different kinds of buildings. We first visited Harbin Ice and Snow World, that is the largest ice and snow art exhibition in the world. The beauty of sculptures were more than I could express. At Harbin Polarland, we enjoyed wonderful performances given by animals. All the visitors were exciting at the performances. What’s more, we visited Siberian Tiger and founded more than 500 tigers lived there. At last, we visited to Heilongjiang Science and Technology Museum.

This travel helped us learn something new. Beside, we made new friends with visitors from different parts of the country.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Future Life

With the development of science and technology, our lives has changed a lot in the past century. Many things that wouldn’t happen before have come reality now. However, our lives will change as well in the future. Our pace of life will greatly speed up, because many machines will help us to finish our work. For example, when you are lacked in food at home, you can tell the robot to buy some. Because many things can be done autonomously(自动地), so people will have more time for fun. Besides, their environment will be much better than now, because some effective measure are taken to protect our environment. People can travel to the outer space free. Human beings may live on another planets like the moon and Mars. The earth will still be a beautiful home for us.

短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）．并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线（________），并在该词的下面写出修改后的词．

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．

Dear Sir，

  I read their advertisement in yesterday's China Daily．I feel I am qualified to the job in your company．I'm 20 year old and in a good health．After graduation from a middle school，I studied English for six years，and I also learn bookkeeping，typewriting and public relations．I do good in operating PC and has a good command of English．I'm interesting in the position of a secretary．I want very much be accepted by your company．I'll work hard until I can be a member in your company．

                                                            Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有2处.涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:此行缺一个词在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

    2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As winter holiday are coming soon, my classmates are trying very hard to get train tickets to go to home. After make up my mind, I decided to stay in Shanghai where my university is. This is the first time that I spent the Festival away from home. My parents agreed to visit me, but I will have a different festival. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them some nice gift. It will be the big surprise for them. Our parents have done a lot for me, and I think it is high time that I did something specially to express my thanks.

下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：

   在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线

 （ ﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 Today is Mother’s Day. I didn’t seen my mother for two weeks . My mother is a

successfully doctor and always busy on her work. When I was a child, my mother

sent me to live with my grandparents, which lived in a small village. When I was

old enough to go to the school, I began to come back to live with my parents.

However, my mother was often too busy that every day when she came back before work,

I had fallen asleep. I used to hating her, but now I can understood her. This afternoon

we gave her a call, saying, “Mom, I love you.” 

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每旬中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   People enjoy take trips. But what are the reasons why they leave home willingly? One reason is for education. People travel because we are curious about other different custom and cultures. When people are tourists, they get a quickly look at various ways of living. Even a short look at another kind of lifestyle is important lesson. On a trip, a person can learn directly by visiting to museums and historic spots. What does a tourist whom travels in Paris learn? He got a picture in his mind and a real life of one of the French people. He learns about their attitudes towards life, and what they feel about business, beautiful and history.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Grandpa,

   How are you these days? I have been missed you very much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant view there. You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study and the findings will be used as materials for your research. Since we'll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.

Yours,

Danny

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Miss Li,

    I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.

Thank you.

                                                                 Yours,

                                                               Wang Min

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下文共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.

In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.