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In the past, we usually go shopping in stores, supermarkets and malls. And nowadays, shopping online has become an important part of many peopleˈs life.
According to a study on online shopping in China, the number of online shopping in China has already come 2.67 billion, only second to that in America. It is show that most of them are people aged from 18 to 35. Besides, many women than men prefer online shopping.
There are various reason for peopleˈs preference for online shopping. First of all, itˈs advantage is to spare much time and trouble in shopping outside. In an addition, various goods attract people, especial young people who are more particular about styles and fashions. Last but not least, online shopping has a greater advantage in price, which can attracted online shoppers.