增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

  During the vacation, the weather was hot and I could not do much work, but I lived happily. On the morning I usually got up early and take a walk in the garden. After the breakfast, I began reading English and did some exercise in maths. I worked quite hardly and made good progress. I spent nearly the whole afternoon outside. I went swim in the river and didn’t come back when it was about five or six. Sometimes a friend of me would come to see me and we would spend some hours listened to music. In this way I spent my vacation happily. I not only studied well but also became good swimmer. 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, mobile payment is becoming more and more popular with our shopping. In addition to pay in cash, by cheque or credit card, a consumer can use a mobile phone to pay for a wide range of services and goods. Compared with those traditional mean, mobile payment is faster and more convenient. Besides, it can be used at any given time or place, thus save much time and energy. Furthermore, we can’t overlook the fact it must be operated with a phone and a network. And it is only recently which the technology to support such systems has become wide available. It will be arouse public concern over its potential risk, such as the account security and other unexpected problems. Technology is changing its life rapidly, so we should get ready for it.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。  

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On July twenty­seventh last summer，I as well as my brother leave for Tianjin in order to go to Jay’s concert. I was very fond of Jay’s songs but I couldn’t wait to see him. When we arrived the center of the water stadium，the large number of people were waiting there. We met a few fans of Jay’s at the stadium in where we took some picture with them. We were waiting for Jay，smiled and excited. Finally，at 8 o’ clock in the evening，Jay turned up slow among the cheers of all fans. Dressing in a blue coat，Jay sang many more beautiful songs.

Following my rhythm，I sang to music. Finally，the conce rt ended up with a famous song by Jay.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2   只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

For a person, belief always plays an important role in his life. Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorfully life. Otherwise, he will lose him in his own way of life. Belief is so important what it can change one’s fate. Marie Curie, famous scientist, also has set a good example. In 1898, Marie find a new element. In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hardly. At last they saw at the dim blue light of new element—radium, which made her dream came true.

To my personal view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to getting successful and master his own life.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I love camping. It is my favouritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year, my families and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp. What I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr.Zhang,

   Known that our school is going to set up elective (选修的) English courses, I’d like to give some advices. English Visual-Audio-Oral Course is a good choice . Most of us are interest at English videos and songs, that provide us with great images and beautiful music to listen to . As result , we can enjoy some local customs and singing English songs with joy. In addition , we need to improve our oral English . When we are always learning English , we may not be able to make a fluence speech . We can’t easy communicate with others like native speakers . That is why I suggested taking a Speech Course . I’ll be glad that if you can consider my suggestions.

Nowadays，the ice bucket challenge is among the

Ice bucket challenge is like the epidemic(流行病)，64   becomes popular around the world very            65   (quick)．The starter holds the activity，66   (hope)people can experience the ALS patients’ pain．In the activity，people need to pour the ice water down from their heads，and then propose another three people．They can either choose to accept the challenge  67    donate 100 dollars，or do the both．

The ALS makes people’s muscles become hard．It is hard for the patients to move．Stephen Hocking is one of the 68    (suffer)．Ice bucket challenge is  69   great success．Until now，a big donation              70   (receive)．

  （1） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   Television plays important part in our life. It shows us information programme, like the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for another things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our lives ever since.

  （2） 最近,你班就高考后的暑假打算展开了一次讨论。有的想打工挣钱以便继续到大学学习;有的打算学习一门技术去挣钱养家;有的想和同学一起去旅游。你想在家陪家人待两周放松身心,然后去自己喜欢的上海看看,以便选择一个喜欢的大学在那里继续学习。这个暑假对大多数同学而言都意味着新生活的开始。

要求:1．词数100左右;

2．开头已给出,不计入总词数;

3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

   We're going to finish our middle school in June after the important College Entrance Examination. Recently, our class has a heat discussion on what to do in this real summer holiday.________