假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On July twentyseventh last summer，I as well as my brother leave for Tianjin in order to go to Jay’s concert. I was very fond of Jay’s songs but I couldn’t wait to see him. When we arrived the center of the water stadium，the large number of people were waiting there. We met a few fans of Jay’s at the stadium in where we took some picture with them. We were waiting for Jay，smiled and excited. Finally，at 8 o’ clock in the evening，Jay turned up slow among the cheers of all fans. Dressing in a blue coat，Jay sang many more beautiful songs.
Following my rhythm，I sang to music. Finally，the conce
rt ended up with a famous song by Jay.