假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

         2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   What a morning! I woke up earlier to make sure I had packed everything we needed for this trip. Since it was fall in the US, so I had to pack for colder weather. Moot of my suitcase was filled with gift for friends and family. I hoped nothing would get lose on the way. The most important item: a camera to take photos. After a light lunch in an airport, I sat down to wait for my flight to boarding. Luckily I had brought reading or writing materials. I was dressed comfortable -- jeans and a casual blouse -- and ready the long voyage, with an overnight stopover in Tokyo.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, mobile payment is becoming more and more popular with our shopping. In addition to pay in cash, by cheque or credit card, a consumer can use a mobile phone to pay for a wide range of services and goods. Compared with those traditional mean, mobile payment is faster and more convenient. Besides, it can be used at any given time or place, thus save much time and energy. Furthermore, we can’t overlook the fact it must be operated with a phone and a network. And it is only recently which the technology to support such systems has become wide available. It will be arouse public concern over its potential risk, such as the account security and other unexpected problems. Technology is changing its life rapidly, so we should get ready for it.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2   只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

For a person, belief always plays an important role in his life. Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorfully life. Otherwise, he will lose him in his own way of life. Belief is so important what it can change one’s fate. Marie Curie, famous scientist, also has set a good example. In 1898, Marie find a new element. In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hardly. At last they saw at the dim blue light of new element—radium, which made her dream came true.

To my personal view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to getting successful and master his own life.

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do anything meaningful instead of staying at home, so I was got a job at a restaurant, worked there as a cleaner. I worked seven hour a day for three weeks. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it in half way, but I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home lately in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term begins. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really successful experience.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I love camping. It is my favouritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year, my families and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp. What I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr.Zhang,

   Known that our school is going to set up elective (选修的) English courses, I’d like to give some advices. English Visual-Audio-Oral Course is a good choice . Most of us are interest at English videos and songs, that provide us with great images and beautiful music to listen to . As result , we can enjoy some local customs and singing English songs with joy. In addition , we need to improve our oral English . When we are always learning English , we may not be able to make a fluence speech . We can’t easy communicate with others like native speakers . That is why I suggested taking a Speech Course . I’ll be glad that if you can consider my suggestions.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

If I have the honor to be chose to work for the  29th Olympic Games, I will at first

improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitor. Second, I will learn

more about history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third,  since I

was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should

be able to tell  visitor about our history and culture and show them their great

achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.                 

假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

 修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

           2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in the ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poor equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and more considerate. Besides, I enjoy the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the most of it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidences and got me motivated.

My experience tells me that it is not what you are giving but how you make use of it which determines who you are.

   One day I had lunch at a restaurant and bought lunch for a couple of girls 61  were sitting near my table at that time. They were discussing the cost of this or that on the menu 62 (hot) . It seemed that they only concerned themselves with how much their bill was going to be. So I decided to pay for them.

     After 63 (hear) their talk, I knew that they might make 64  (much) money than I . However, not only 65 (do) I have some unexpected income that day, but I got 66  offer from my neighbor to fix my lawnmower 67  free. And he asked me to pay it forward. So I paid their bill at last. To my surprise, it happened to be the same as I should 68  (pay) my neighbor! I wished that they might relax and enjoy life a bit more because of my act of 69  (kind). I also gave the waiter a SMILE card and told him 70  (give) it to them, because I hoped they could pay it forward!