假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One year ago, I was in great trouble. I work hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term exam, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for suggestions when I got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, “Exam results are sometime unexpected. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advices. Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinions from old people.

短文改错

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

During the summer holiday, I helped my parents did a lot of housework, like cooking, washing and clean the house. At first, I didn't know what to do these things, but thanks to my mother, I learned a lot of. At the end of each day, when my parents came home after a day's hard works, they could see clean house and enjoy the dishes I cooked for them. The smile on their face were the best award for my efforts. I felt very happy though exhausting. Helping my parents was challenging and very rewarding. It made my holiday much meaningful.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉（ \）。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧），在其下面写出修改后的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在其下面写出修改后的词。

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made of glass. I enjoyed sitting close to the window and looked at the view. On the left-hand side of the classroom, I can easily see the football field. In the morning, it was full of students which were doing exercise. The view from the back of the classroom was splendid either. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distant, I could enjoy the view of snowy mountains. In the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me feel like I was dreaming. Though I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, but I will never forget it.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

   Last Sunday, I was busy cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rang. I hurried to answer it and sure enough, it was my closely friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen immediately, only find that it was full of smoke or the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I felt very ashamed. I told the firemen that was my careless that caused the heavy smoke. Thankful, everything was ok but the beef. 

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     (2)只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toy than I did. There was one on particular Iˈd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasnˈt looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy playing with a toy or face my cousin again. I would always know Iˈd done something wrong. Later on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and returned it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.

单句改错

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

(1)The dog was panting(喘息) because of the hot weather was hot.

(2)Computers can’t completely take place of human beings.

(3)All the afternoon, he studied with the door locking.

(4)In her great surprise, she saw her father sitting on the floor, and read the same story.

(5)This kind of cloth feels very softly.

(6)Though the thief tried to break away the policeman.

(7)I began to feel bad about that we had done.

(8)I told the man I have left my family on sinking a steamboat downstream.

(9)I don’t think someone in the restaurant knew what had happened.

(10)I crawled along the deck, finding Jim and told him what I had heard.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike most in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very unpleasant in winter that it is cold and wind is blowing heavily. It can also be very dangerously. Of course I will be very careful in my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. One day I went to school and come back to find the front wheel was missed. Worse still, it was the long walk to the repairerˈs shop.

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

      增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

      删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

      修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

      注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

                 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack，

I’m sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new schoolbecause you find hard to make friends. Now,I’d like to offer you any advice. Firstly,it’s normal of you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly,you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly,it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities,what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you’re friendly to the others.

I hope the above suggestion will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you in the future.

Yours，

Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I look at this picture of myself．I realize of how fast time flies．I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years．About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club．Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time；car magazines and musical instruments．I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums．This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days．

      71.  Mr. Zhang, who is our new teacher, so concerned about us that we all like her. But there was a time that I disliked English. Sometimes, I even did many things not concerned study at class. As a result, I went through several failure. Later she happened to discover it and talk to me face to face. To make me like English, she never got tiring of telling me how to learn English well. She encouraged us to keep a journal in English and try to set down what I saw and heard. Thanks for my English teacher , I have made a great progress and am getting along well with my English study. This is the first time that I had not been afraid of English any more.