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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning, in the English class, our teacher showed to us a movie A Beautiful Mind. The movie told him a story about a brilliant professor John Nash. He made so many brilliant achievements in several field. He finally won the Nobel Prize, what proved that his great breakthrough had great affected people. John had a serious mental illness if he was a little boy,
so he refused to take medicine which could make his mind thinking slowly; he kept doing his research while struggling with his mental illness. The lucky thing was that his wife supported him all time. Because of the support from his family, John can work on his job. After winning the Nobel Prize, he thanked his wife.