假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    There are much fun places in our school. But my favor place is the reading room. After class, I could go inside and pick out one of my favorite books to read. There are such many books that I don't know which to read firstly.

    I love reading, and J. K. Rowling is my favorite writer. I have been read the Harry Potter series many times, I have never got bored. In my opinion, reading not only broadens my horizons, but also help me to be a better person. I can learn different things of books. In the library, I can forget my troubles when read my favorite novels.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

       增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

       删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

       修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

       注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

       Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher. Anna. When we arrived, we made a camp fire first. Then, Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more we food to eat that night. I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean. Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright. We all sat around the fire, listening Anna’s high stories about her childhood. She was born into a poor family or she had worked very hard to be successful. I was very touched that I couldn’t sleep the whole night, thought about being a teacher in the future. When I get home, I said to my parents, “Everything was great about the camping. I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future.”

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文字共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So did I. My mother is a ordinary teacher. She works hard at school, just as if other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She has suffered in arthritis（关节炎）for many years. In spite of this, she never stops working or giving up hope. I still remember the day which my mother received a card of congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director. The card read:” Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teacher’s Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud of my mother because she is my best teacher as good as my mother.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。  

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On July twenty­seventh last summer，I as well as my brother leave for Tianjin in order to go to Jay’s concert. I was very fond of Jay’s songs but I couldn’t wait to see him. When we arrived the center of the water stadium，the large number of people were waiting there. We met a few fans of Jay’s at the stadium in where we took some picture with them. We were waiting for Jay，smiled and excited. Finally，at 8 o’ clock in the evening，Jay turned up slow among the cheers of all fans. Dressing in a blue coat，Jay sang many more beautiful songs.

Following my rhythm，I sang to music. Finally，the conce rt ended up with a famous song by Jay.