假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

Last weekend，I went to visit my English teacher，who was already in his fifty．He gives me a lot of help when I was a junior middle school student．Delighting to see me，he asked my senior middle school life．Then he advised me to make fully preparations for the coming entrance examination．It was so a pleasure to see him again that I didn’t notice it was pretty later．I had to say goodbye to each other．

He is not only a good teacher but my close friend．Wherever I will go，I will always treasure a time that I spent with my teacher．

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

   修改：在错词下面划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限—词；

     2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

   Fred Smith, Cindy’s father, is a businessman working for large company.

   Her mother, Mary Smith, is a housewife for many years, but has now return to work as a secretary. Cindy has a brother, Jimmy, who is sixteen. He is in the twelve grade of the local high school. Cindy’s family often go to church on Sundays, but at college, Cindy does not attend to church every Sunday. Politically, Cindy’s parents regard himself as “middle-of-the –road”. And among all the problem facing the United States today, they are most concerning about pollution and the overuse of non-renewable resources so as oil. The whole family often spend evenings together watch television.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

(2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hundred of tourists and journalists are now travelling to Jilin Province because the Lake Tianchi Monster has been returned.The monster was first seen one hundred years before in Lake Tianchi.Local people tell a story about that happened when the animal first appeared in 1903.They were frightening and tried to kill the monster.They fired at the animal six times but missed.In later years, people report seeing an animal swimming across the lake.Some people said they were about two or three kilometers away the animal.Others said they were much close.They described the monster as have a huge head who had two big brown eyes and a neck about 1.5 meters long.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，

As summer vacation is come soon, my classmates is trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they come here, I will show they around my university and the city as well as. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprise for them. My parents had done a lot for me, and I think it is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks.

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Two weeks ago, I wanted to write something, but I couldn’t find a pen. But I decided to buy one. When I rode on my bicycles across a road, I was knocked down by a truck. Instead of stopping find out what had happened, the driver drove away. I was bad hurt and couldn’t stand up. I didn’t know what to do while a taxi stopped by my side. A young driver got out of the car and asked him about the accident. Then he takes me to the nearest hospital. Later, I found my bike was damaging. I was angry at the truck driver, but I was thankful to the car driver who left before I had asked his name. How a kind man he is!

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Daniel,

   Iˈm pleased to learn what you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend Cool Chinese, the very useful and power Chinese learning software.

   Cool Chinese is special designed for non-Chinese speakers who have just been started learning Chinese. It performs a variety of function and works as a practical guide to Chinese learning. Firstly, it includes a great deal of images and sounds to help you learn Chinese vocabulary. Secondly, by adopt the most advanced voice recognition technology, it reminds you the right pronunciation and intonation all the time like a training partner beside you. All in all, not only can you use the software to learn Chinese easily, but also you will found learning Chinese is full of fun.

  I hope you will like it.

                                                          Yours,

                                             Li Hua

My list of favorite books are long. I read a lot and I just keep finding new favorites. In my family, we often talk about the books we are reading and passing around our favorites. It benefits a whole family.

   I discovered how share favorite books could help strength a friendship long ago. When I was a kid, my friend Liz became very sicker and was going to miss a lot of school. I fill a big bag with some of my favorite books for her read. She never forgot that. Today, she lives thousand of miles away from me, but she sometimes e-mails with me about the books she is reading.

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

      There are lot of experiences in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was very nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally, I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize, my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition, I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

 Mrs. Green is my neighbor. She’s in her forty and has brown hair and big blue eyes. She usually wears a smile above her face, that makes her very attractive. Mrs. Green shows a great interest in everything about China, especially their culture and places of interest. She has large collection of things connecting with China, such as books, videos and tea. Mrs. Green often asks me such many questions about my country that sometimes I have to ask my friends to give her satisfied answers. We get along good with each other and we often had dinner together.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was snowing heavily Monday moming. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to go to school. After the while, the bus came and she got on it. There are many passengers on the bus. Some were talking while some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said. “Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off and help push the bus.” When we heard this, Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing the bus slowly backward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling but the sun was shining.