假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    There are much fun places in our school. But my favor place is the reading room. After class, I could go inside and pick out one of my favorite books to read. There are such many books that I don't know which to read firstly.

    I love reading, and J. K. Rowling is my favorite writer. I have been read the Harry Potter series many times, I have never got bored. In my opinion, reading not only broadens my horizons, but also help me to be a better person. I can learn different things of books. In the library, I can forget my troubles when read my favorite novels.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2．之允许修改10处。

    My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live．Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area．It is always crowded with customers at meal times．Some people even had to wait outside．My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest．Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking．My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time．Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或

修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I am writing to tell you something about the transportation in China. Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed network of public transportation. Beside, we have decided to make efforts to make them much better. I am sure a network will make your travel more conveniently. People usually chose the means of transportation based on some aspects, such as the cost and the time needing. For example, businessmen are more likely to travel plane or high-speed train to save time while office worker tend to take buses or drive to work themselves. Wherever you go to, you can find a suitable means of transportation.

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I'm a huge book lover but like sharing my love for books! So I've been bought books constantly. Finishing reading one book, I placed it in or around my school so that some of my schoolmate can treat themselves to the book. I especial like placing it on a stone table in the little garden in that students might have time to take a rest. I was delighted an other day when I saw a card left on the table to say thanks. And from the card, I knew my book turned out of to be a birthday gift for a strange girl. It was so lovely find out that my book could bring anyone pleasure!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短信。信中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请按照下列格式修改：

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last month the Students' Union of our school organize an English Speech Competition. At first I didn't show some interest and wasn't very much confident. Then my English teacher Mr Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it. Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn. Glancing at my teacher's smiling face, I built up my confidence. Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.

But my teacher's encouragement, I couldn't have won the first prize. I’m proud of Mr Smith or the wonderful experience.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My friend Alice loved diving very much and she dreamed of become a professional diver one day. However, at an age of 14, she got a disease which caused her to become complete deaf. Many people thought a person was deaf wouldn’t be able to dive well and advised him to give up. But Alice had thought differently. She went to school on the morning and then spent every afternoon diving. It was really difficulty for a deaf girl to dive. Therefore, she kept practicing every day. So far she has won several gold medal and is still trying to achieve more.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

       增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

       删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

       修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

       注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

       Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher. Anna. When we arrived, we made a camp fire first. Then, Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more we food to eat that night. I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean. Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright. We all sat around the fire, listening Anna’s high stories about her childhood. She was born into a poor family or she had worked very hard to be successful. I was very touched that I couldn’t sleep the whole night, thought about being a teacher in the future. When I get home, I said to my parents, “Everything was great about the camping. I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future.”

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文字共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So did I. My mother is a ordinary teacher. She works hard at school, just as if other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She has suffered in arthritis（关节炎）for many years. In spite of this, she never stops working or giving up hope. I still remember the day which my mother received a card of congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director. The card read:” Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teacher’s Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud of my mother because she is my best teacher as good as my mother.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1,每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2,只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recent we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspiring by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talks excitedly about their understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will be come true. I also said something about one of my dream at the meeting. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. To realize my dream, I must work hard to learn as much I can. Then I can get into the good medical college which I can prepare myself adequately for the job. Only on this way can I accomplish your goal.