2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 Dear Peter,

     With the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.

One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often used when you quite approve for someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they like. The phrase Miaosha first comes from online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in the very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean he is very rich.

     You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.

       All the best!  

                                                               Yours,
                                                               Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Dear editor,

I’m writing to express my views for about the environment in my hometown. My hometown used to being a beautiful place. Thick forests and green grass can be seen everywhere. However, in order to build more house, people cut down more and more trees. With time went by, the forests were seriously destroyed. Besides, because climate change, it rains little now. As the result, sandstorms happen frequently nowadays, from that people suffer a lot. To change the situation, I hope all people should take well care of the forests and plant more trees. Then your living conditions will be improved sooner or later.

                                                                    Yours,

                                                                        Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sarah,

Iˈm writing because I want apologise about last Friday.

Iˈm really sorry, but I would have met you on time if everything hadnˈt gone wrongly! I didnˈt get there until 9 oˈclock, because my watch breaks and I didnˈt know what time it was. Then I had to walk because Iˈd missed the bus. Believing it or not, I fell over a cat and my trousers became dirt, so I had to go home again! Then I decided to catch other bus, but it arrived late.

I hope you arenˈt too angry about me. Can us go out another day? Would you like to come with me to Andyˈs party on next Saturday night?

Looking forward to hear from you.

Jack

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该同下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      On Wednesday evening, we went to the Town Hall. It was the last day of the year and a largely crowd of people had gathered under the Town Hall clock. It would be strike twelve in twenty minutes' time. Fifteen minute passed and then, at five to twelve, a clock stopped. The big minute hand did not moved. We waited and waited, so nothing happened. Suddenly someone shouts, "It's two minutes past twelve ! The clock has stopped!" I looked at mine watch. It was true. The big clock refused welcome the New Year. At that moment, everybody began to laugh and singing.

Steve Jobs said, “Your time is limited, so don’t waste it living someone else’s life.” This is exactly what I have been thinking.

I love designing very much and I want to be a terrific dress designer when I grow up. This dream does not fit in my parents’ mind. They think being a designer is not a stable profession. I, however, still keep drawing and spend lots of time studying fashion and designing clothes. In my view, success does not necessarily mean fame or wealth, but mean the best of whatever you are. I always believe that, sooner or later, I will have my own studio and my own brand.

Are you tired of living someone else’s dream? No doubt, it’s your life and you have every right to spend it in your own individual way without any hurdles or barriers from others. Give yourself a chance to nurture (培育) your creative qualities in a fear-free and pressure-free climate. Live a life that you choose and be your own boss. Believe in yourself and never abandon your dreams.

假设你校举办看图征文活动，题目为“How to protect your eyesight”。请你用英语写一篇短文，指出图中所反映的现象，并从阅读时间，光线，眼保健操及睡眠等方面，谈谈保护眼睛的具体做法．

注意：

1．词数100-120字；

2．可适当加入细节，以便行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：近视-----near-sighted

眼保健操------eye exercise

How to protect our eyesight

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This afternoon, when I was walking to home after school, I noticed my neighbor Uncle Bob lay by the roadside with his right hand on his chest. It was clear he was badly ill. Several passer-by came up and one of whom offered to call 120. Several minutes later, an ambulance reached ,and took her to the hospital. Then I ran home and told Uncle Bob’s family what had happened. We rushed to the hospital quick. The doctor examined him and suggested he stayed there for a week. I hope Uncle Bob will get good soon.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip. I get up at six o’ clock and we set off by bus. On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked. We all had good time. Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees. It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next , we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air. Finally, we went home at half past four. Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.

Writing

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Friday, Just before the 66^th National Day holiday, I conducted interview with James Watson, a famous American scientist, talk about how to become a successful scientist. On his opinion, to be a scientist, we needed to be very fond of science. What’s most, we have to keep practicing as well as learn from other successful scientist. If we want to be a successful one, besides hard-working, we are supposing to set up for a clear goal as well. James Watson also suggest that every child who is curiously about science should make your effort to realize the dream of becoming a scientist.