假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处。多者（从第11处起）不计分。

  Dear Mary,

I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a very famously school with a long history. We have many experienced teacher and excellent equipment. There were two teaching buildings, and one is for seniors and other is for juniors. There are two lab buildings or a library. Besides Chinese, Maths, English, physics and chemistry, we had some selective courses(选修课). The students can choose what we like to attend. We love our school.

I am looking forward to meet you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

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My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parent went to work in the field take my little sister and Ah Fu along. While they were working, my little sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu follows her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped the water immediately. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking or ran to the river, we saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who has saved my little sister.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

 I’m greatly honored to introduce Shanghai to you. Locating in the east of China, Shanghai is one of the biggest city in the world. Besides, as is known to all is that Shanghai is a financial center of our country. South of Shanghai stood the Oriental Pearl Radio and Television Tower, which is a landmark of the city. At night, what we can see at the top of the tower is breathtaking view. In terms of the place where fascinates visitors most, the Bund looks the most beautifully. Compared it with the Bund, Yu Garden attracts me more so it is a good place where you can taste all kinds of delicious food. All in all, Shanghai is amazing and you can visit it on person.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

The Amber Room was designed a fancy style and was decorating with gold and jewels. It takes the best artists about 10 years to finish it. It was first made by Frederick William I, he used it as his palace. In 1716, Frederick William I gave them to Peter the Great, and it became a gift. The Amber Room became part of Czar’s winter palace, and then served as a small reception hall. Later, Catherine II added more details to it, making it more beautiful. However, in 1941, when Russia and German were at the war, it was stolen by Nazis after it was removed to other places. After that, what happened to it remains a mystery. Recently, the Russians and the Germans had built a new one by studying old photo of the former Amber Room.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I have learned that you would hold a discussion this Saturday afternoon. I am writing this letter express my deepest regret.

The reason for my absence is because I have to meet some foreign friend from Australia this Saturday afternoon. Their plane is due to arriving then and it is impossible to rearrange my time. It is really a pity that I will miss so a valuable opportunity to share my thoughts to you about Frog by Mo Yan. In addition, I wonder that if you could send me a summary of the discussion next Monday and I promise to return them as soon as possible.

I’m true sorry for my absence and hope that you can understand me.

                                                        Yours,

                                                         Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class 6, Grade 2. I’m writing to you to apply to join in the English Drama Club.

I have been interesting in performing since my childhood. I have also read most of Shakespeare’s plays, that fascinate me greatly. Beside, I am good at spoken English because I always practice speaking with native speakers at our school’s English corner. I win first prize in the Speech Contest of our school last year. If I am accepted, I would like to be a director or an actor so that I can decide which plays to put up and how to perform it well.

I expect to put my talent to good use by performing with other member. I hope to be given such chance.

Looking forward to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My family was very poor when I was a child. My parents lost their jobs or lived with heavy pressure. As a result, I wanted to study hardly so as to have different future. During my high school life, I spent all my time studied those difficult subjects, which made me one of the best student in our school. Before graduation, I was admitted into a key university. I meet a lot of interesting friends there. Now, I am working in a big company and I am unable to afford anything I want. What’s more, my parents also have been found new jobs. So I believe that our dream will came true if we try our best.

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Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Hua from Nanyang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s pick up a book and read”.

Nowadays, with the grow of the Internet, many teenagers are addicted on online games. They usually spend long hours in front of computers in their spare time. The long-term use of computers causes many students suffer loss of memory. As the consequence, their interest in studying also drops greatly.

It is high time that teenagers get back to a normal life. I think that is a good idea to help them form the habit of reading. On the one hand , reading can broaden teenager horizons. On the other hand ,reading can deepen our understanding of the events happen at home and abroad. However, they will get good grades in their exams.

Let’s pick up a book and read.

Thank you!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

During the winter vacation, I worked as volunteer in Xinhua Bookstore, I work 8 hours every day for more than 20 days. There, I mainly did some cleaning, put the books with order and introduced much books to customers. I helped the shop assistants to sell more than 3,000 copies of books. Through the activity, I’ve come to fully understood that it is not easily to work. Meanwhile, I have also learned how to communicate with different customer, which has built up your confidence. This great activity has not only been enriched my social life, and inspired me to study harder and realize my future dreams.