词。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ ),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( ＼ )划掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quallty oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．  只允许修改10处，多者（从第1l处起）不计分。

I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favour. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in travelling, swimming and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about  her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Whitehead,

I’m greatly sorry to tell you that that will be impossible for me to attend the meeting on this Sunday you asked me to. I am terrible sorry. I know it is important because we are suppose to introduce our products then. So one of my friends, Jim, would come at that time and as it will be the first time for her to come to the city, I have to go to the railway station to meet him. Is it possible what I get all the materials need ready and ask Li Dong to do the job instead of me? I would appreciate if you would agree.

                                             Yours,

                                              Johnson

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

As is known by all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bring great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jam.

How can we solve these problems then? As far as I am concerning, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol but they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because of they won't give off waste gas. Beside, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our healthy.

As result, let's take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join them.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

  2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’ll never forget the story which happen on a bus the other day. It was a wind day. I got on the bus after school. A young lady was standing next to me. In a flash, a strong wind blew through the window. A lady’s false hair was blown away. To our surprises, she was hairless. While she was wondering what to do it, many passengers laughed loudly. So she managed to hold back her tears. Saw this, I picked up her false hair and said, “Don’t sad, Miss. I’m sure your hair will grow soon.” When I glanced to other passengers, they all quick nodded their heads with shame.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在多出来的单词上画一斜杠（﹨）

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear editor,

    I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduate. Nowadays many of graduates are looking forward to obtain employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.

    As the matter of fact, there is not enough opportunities to satisfy the most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are bad needed and a lot of posts are waiting us. Rural areas are a vast world, which you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.

    Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as you have in the city.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

         2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   What a morning! I woke up earlier to make sure I had packed everything we needed for this trip. Since it was fall in the US, so I had to pack for colder weather. Moot of my suitcase was filled with gift for friends and family. I hoped nothing would get lose on the way. The most important item: a camera to take photos. After a light lunch in an airport, I sat down to wait for my flight to boarding. Luckily I had brought reading or writing materials. I was dressed comfortable -- jeans and a casual blouse -- and ready the long voyage, with an overnight stopover in Tokyo.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This afternoon, when I was walking to home after school, I noticed my neighbor Uncle Bob lay by the roadside with his right hand on his chest. It was clear he was badly ill. Several passer-by came up and one of whom offered to call 120. Several minutes later, an ambulance reached ,and took her to the hospital. Then I ran home and told Uncle Bob’s family what had happened. We rushed to the hospital quick. The doctor examined him and suggested he stayed there for a week. I hope Uncle Bob will get good soon.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip. I get up at six o’ clock and we set off by bus. On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked. We all had good time. Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees. It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next , we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air. Finally, we went home at half past four. Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.

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